This is the U.S.A. we should not be ashamed,
but people steal someone Else's identity not wanting to use their own name
Two men getting married, a woman having having a wife
five people just got killed, four by gun, one by knife
This is not what I call living a golden life
U.S., join hands in unity,a you, a better me
in a better community
We act as if these fifty states are fifty countries, but we all know
The Illinois of America don't sound right to you or me
Do you pledge allegiance to the UN-united countries of America? because I don't
could you take a stand and join hands? because I will even if you won't
So I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America
We take stand hand in hand to be united forever
by:superstar Emani Thomas
15 comments:
I think this poem is wonderful.Keep writing and using words to express yourself.
i think you do your best at your speeches and all i could say is keep on keeping on
i think that your poem is great and you make great poems and speeches.
!!!GREAT JOB!!!
I think the world is getting out of hand people just have to stop...think...and understand that are nation is changing.
I love this poem Emani is going to be a good poet when she grow up. good job Emani!!!!
Emani I have to give you your props for that poem, so keep up the good work.
Emani, you are a really great writer. Don't ever let any one tell you can't do it because I believe in you, and you keep on writing these poems and I will continue to encourage you!!!!!!!!!!!
Emani, I love the way you write. Your voice is one that needs to be heard
Nice poem Mr.B i love your blog.
yours truly Kadesia Dunlap Rm 213
Emani your poam is great I liked it alot.
that was the best peom everrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great emani it was awsome!!!!!!!!!!! I'll be waiting for another one pretty soon so do what you do and you'll do great!
To My creative daughter,
I just want to encourage you to keep up the good work! I know you get your writing skills from me.
LOL
MOM
Dear Emani,
this is a un-united united states and we should join hands and it is weird for a man with a man and a woman having a wife.even though i've heard the poem like a billon times,but we should join hands to be a better community.
LOL,
your little sister KIara
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