Friday, October 3, 2008

Sea Of Red

The sun is setting , it's nearly gone.
I imagine I see red ponds .
Patches of red and orange fill the sky.
Orange and yellow clouds go by.
As I look up I imagine a sea , a sea of red nearly turning blue.
White clouds morphed into birds
if only you could see them too.
Sea of red of flying birds , now turning blue
say hello to the moon.

7 comments:

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Anonymous said...

Miah great poam!!!.It rocks!!!!!.

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Anonymous said...

Wonderful poem Miah. The text color coincides with your description of a setting sun and a rising moon. The world wants more!

Anonymous said...

great poem MIAH!!!

Anonymous said...

I would say that's a good poem, but I almost could not see words that was in yellow.

Anonymous said...

Miah this is a very good peom!!!