You see what love is for
he sent you from heaven and open the door.
God is good, and god is great,
he let you in from our heavenly gate.
we pray that we don't go to hell,
are black people that's going to jail?.
this is the destruction that the devil has brought
God take us into your heavenly VAULT.
I am only 11
I pray to god I go to heaven
Jaquez Williams
he sent you from heaven and open the door.
God is good, and god is great,
he let you in from our heavenly gate.
we pray that we don't go to hell,
are black people that's going to jail?.
this is the destruction that the devil has brought
God take us into your heavenly VAULT.
I am only 11
I pray to god I go to heaven
Jaquez Williams
17 comments:
I really like your picture,and I like the way you used certain kind of words to express yourself!
Nice poem Jaquez. I would like to see more of this thoughtfulness from you.
Your peom is GREAT
oh my God I hope and pray I go to heaven but one thing my pastor told me that if we pray and obey god word we all will go to heaven!!!!!!!!!!
Jaquez, I love your poem!!! I didnt know that you were so deep. We all pray that we go to heaven
That was a beatiful poem I have to say it was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like that poem.No STUUUUFFFF Jaquez
hi jarquez this is tracy i really like your poem i, i liked the way it flows and i think your a great poet
this poem is great from someone like you i didnt thnk you can be so thoughtful to put words in a sentence with so much creativity.
Good poem Jaquez!!!
I am very suprosed at you.
That was a great poem, i loved it.
I KNOW i will go to heaven!!!
~~~GREAT JOB~~~
Great poem jaquez.You is a great poet.When you grow up you're going to be a great poem writter!!
''good job''
I LOVE THIS POEM. it's really good and all i got to say is you go girl!
Jaquez this is really nice. I really do enjoy this poem. Keep writing encouraging poems like this.
Sincerely,
Emani's mom Ms. Thomas
jaquez nice poem love the way you make your words flow thorough i pray and hope i go to heaven too!
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