One day a young girl named Miah told her mom to make her a dress. Miah was going to go dance.The next night Miah's mom told Miah her dress was ready. Long and sky blue was how the dress looked. That night Miah had her dress on and walked to a bridge by her house. When she crossed the road, a car ran over her. Four years later, two boys were going to go dance. One was excited to go, but the there one wasn't. The two boys were in a car they where about to pass the bridge where Miah got ran over. They saw a girl standing by the bridge they told her to get in the car. "Where are you going ?", asked the boys. "I'm going to go dance", said Miah. "You can go with us we are going too ". The girl looked cold and one of the guys gave her his jacket. They went to the dance and then they droped her off where they found her.The next morning, the guy that gave Miah his jacket went to go look for the girl. He asked a lady if she knew the girl. The lady said: "Yes, that's my daughter. She died four years ago".They went to Miah's tomb and the jacket was on the top of her tomb. And she still haunts that bridge trying to go dancing. Some say that only young boys that are going to dance can see her.
10 comments:
Great story Lisbeth! You had the right amount of suspense within the story. It also allowed the reader to use their imagination to make it spooky.
ooh that was good
Wonderful Amazingly Scary Story!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow after that i'm still scared.
That was a great story.
that's a great story lisabeth.
Wow!That was really good.I'm pretty scared, like literally!It's really creepy.
That was so good the day i heard it i wentto tell my parents and my sister!
This was an awsome story, and I can't wait to read the next one you post on the blog!!!
I liked it, but you copied it off a movie.
NO SHE DID NOT jovon
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